Thoughts of the 9-years old DINA . . The youngest Writer . .

Thursday, April 05, 2007

My Poem : I Want To Fly !!

Ppl u have to focus with me now because its a long story. Here u go the complicated poem (( I Want To Fly)):


Someday I will fly

Very very high

I will touch the sky

But this is a dream


Umm…but it doesn’t seem


Someday I will fly

Because I will try

I will fly with the birds

And I will catch butterflies


I am gonna fly, I am gonna fly.



I wrote it today in my class do u know y?!?!?!
Because the teacher told us to write a poem

that’s y ((we had a lesson about rainbow poems
first they gave us two poems of two famous writers
(do u know that I don’t really remember their
names!!)el mohem then the teacher told us to
write in our copybook any kind of poems and
she said If there is someone who cant write a
poem let him\her write a story about something,
so I decided to write a poem ).


The end of the big story!!

Traaaa

7 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

V good i love this one.

12:14 PM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Bravo Dina :).. keep it up dear
good job, when i was your age, i didn't even know how to speak english :D , you will be a great writer in the future, god bless you :)

3:47 PM

 
Blogger Dina Dots said...

thx all

12:08 AM

 
Blogger and life goes on... said...

very nice words.. bravoooo! :)

2:23 AM

 
Blogger Dina Dots said...

thx

3:00 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

goood one Dina... I read the talent behind the lines of your nice poem...

Keep the good work!

5:53 AM

 
Blogger Dina Dots said...

thx khawaja i appreciate ur words.

1:19 AM

 

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